Weak

by Kayla   Sep 30, 2005


Standing all alone
In a dark hallway
Hearing the voices
That I hear everyday
They tell me Im not good enough
They tell me Im not worth the time
They tell me Im selfish
And I think thats a sign
A sign that its time to give up
A sign that its time to let go
A sign that I have never noticed
But one that I now know
I will listen to the things they say
And I will die when they tell me to
I will end my life they way the want
I dont know what else I can do
I cant hold on any longer
It hurts to speak
I have no choice
The voices have made me weak

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    Another great poem. I am also hearing the voices, only i am sure that they are mine....
    Vanessa
    xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Interesting, i liked it, i couldn't really catch on to the rhyme scheme and it wasn't a big deal so i didn't really go through it looking for one, but yeah this is a neat idea...simple yeah, but it's good, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Wow awesome poem... the flow was good.. but maybe it should be in the depression section?? anyways great poem.
    stay strong hunn.. much love.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christopher Liau

    You use the word "they" in line 15 when i think you mean "the"

    I like the last 3 lines. good show of emotion. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Thats great
    i lvoe it
    a lot of emotoins
    5/5

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