Modern Day Romeo and Juliet

by shenoa   Sep 30, 2005


He never uses those words
always Denies addiction
each day drowning in self pity
living life of affliction

so sweet and naive
her soul overwhelms him
but her face pale and weak
her body far to thin

it's so hard for him to love
he has to turn away
but her voice calls to him
pleading for him to stay

And she calls out to him...
"please don't leave me,
in this world all alone"
she says it so innocently
in such a pleading tone

But his heart broke down long ago
only emptiness lies inside
he could never love her
because that part of him died

Still, her voice enchants
makes him feel something new
makes something grow inside
not knowing what to do

each day goes by so quick
slowly these feelings begin to win
she wins over that empty part
winning over him

As she calls out....
"lease don't leave me,
in this world all alone"
she says it so innocently
in such a pleading tone

But his heart broke down long ago
only emptiness lies inside
he could never love her
because that part of him died

Powder on her face
cold and alone on the floor
He falls to his knees screaming
as soon as he walked through her door

the lines lay willing
so hard to deny
white dust disappears
with his defeated cry

the room begins spinning
the bitterness in his throat
he can't deny it this time
his heart she had broke

He lies there next to her
looks sadly at her face
knowing that deep down
this was his true place

his breathing slowly fades
his eyes begin to close
modern day Romeo and Juliet
ended by a cocaine overdose

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  • 18 years ago

    by PassingAngel

    Wow. That is truely excellent. The flow is amazing. I love it. And the rhyming just fits perfectly together. I love the wording and everything about this poem. I gave you a 5 because you deserve it. Good job. Keep it up. 5/5.
    -waves-

    -Passing

  • 18 years ago

    by -Beauty-

    HoTT Hott Hott...2 Tell u the truth I was speachless after I Read This P()3M!!!!So True!!!!!!Good Writing!!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    This is a very interesting piece. Addiction is a sad thing to deal with, you write about it very passionately.
    I do have this one suggestion. In this stanza:

    "each day goes by so quick
    slowly these feelings begin to win
    she wins over that empty part
    winning over him"

    The word "win" and "winning" is used way too many times. It makes it very repititious and takes away from the poem.
    Other than that, the poem is really good. Take care~Holly