Nice job like the flow alot keep up the good work and thanks so much for your comment

Nice poem, really well written. I liked the words you've used in it.

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Hmmm, very intresting, I have a few suggestions though! 1) Guilty is randomly repeated three times, and in such a short poem, that takes away from the meaning of the repeated word 2) rise and lie dont rhyme 3) some of your rhymes sound forced ("the innocent man who's friends will hale
the beginning of the end for justice scales","my story is the same as all
my innocents is the only fall ")
Good job overall though!

You write amazing dark poems i enjoy them all. Well done on a nicely penned dark poem. 5/5 ~mel

"my story is the same as all"

That's a great line. I like this poem for it's honesty. It really seems like you're speaking straight, not embellishing anything more than it needs to be. I think it's beautiful.