Broken Heart

by Illusion   Sep 30, 2005


Raw, cold flesh
Hanging from her bones
Black blood dripping
Agony and painful moans

Cold rain pelting
Acid to her skin
Darkness hovering
Waiting to begin

Catching fire
Blood to oil flames
Flames engulfing
Meaningless memories and names

Pain lingering
Dripping from her heart
She let love in
And was left with a broken heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Thats really good, i like!-xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Girl, you are AMAZING!!!!!1 This is so cool...5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey this was very descriptive i totally loved it hope that youre okay!!!! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Eyes_Of_Rain

    You are a very talented young lady. This is an awesome poem. Very deep, and emotionally disturbing. I adore it, and have added you to my favorites as a result of this one poem alone and it's impact. Never stop writing. You were obviously, born to do it. True.

    Thanks also for your kind words on my poem 'Shattered', they were very meaningful to me, and shall be treasured in my heart, always.

    Always,
    ~Sherry~

  • 18 years ago

    by SiCK N TWiSTED

    Dat was hott..i like ur poem.

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