This has some great imagery(plus I'm a sucker for love poems, sad poems, and rain poems), some really good description.But the sadness, the 'raining in my heart' and 'tears' kind of come out of the blue, without much explanation, perhaps something added earlier in the poem to connect that emotional part of it, a vague reference to a mood or person or situation that has caused the sadness.This is such a strong piece, I think a little revision would only make it better.Just my opinion.Very well written though, I love the images and flow of the piece.

Thanks Gary, I will take a look at it. I can't wait to read some of your stuff, too.

Roy

Funny how people with adictions, depression, and just struggling with life find release in poems, and good ones at that.

Great work keep it up

I had to read this one a couple of times because of the stanzas i get lost, but thats me i love it though 5.5