She...

by Courtney   Oct 3, 2005


She
She knew me before the chaos of life
She saved my sanity from high school
She kept my secrets safe and my dreams alive
She took the best thing I had away
She dumped me as a friend
She

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  • 17 years ago

    by garrett32

    What is being written is very clear and understanding and i really shouldnt be one to cryticise but if it twas a hair longer and explained a little more it could be so much more...

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    I think this deserves more than a 1. It needs work though. You have good ideas but I think they need developing slightly. I don't think this works as a really short poem.
    Sarah x

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