Two to eternity

by aaron c s   Oct 3, 2005


It's only been two days since I saw you last,
But baby it's felt like an eternity!
I want so bad to spend every minute with you.
This feeling I have is making me crazy!

We've been together two weeks, two days,
But baby it's felt like an eternity!
And every kiss between us,
Has made my heart jump with glee!

I've liked you for two months, two weeks, two days,
But baby it's felt like an eternity!
Every time you look at me and smile,
I now there is no need to worry.

I hope we're together for oh so long,
I hope we're together for an eternity!
I can't wait till I say I love you!
I'll really mean it, you'll see!

All these days add up pretty fast.
They add up to an eternity!
With us together in love,
And that's the way it's always gonna be!

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  • 18 years ago

    by GoddessOfWings

    Oh how lovely. So romantic and expressive, 5/5. You did this really well; constantly referring to the date's makes it more effective. Nice one ^_~

    Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl soo sweet. I absolutlely loved this. Whoever you love this much is def. a lucky person~ keep up the great work ~ it had a wonderful flow and it went together very nicely. 5/5~ xox take care xox

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Awww this is so sweet, a very soppy love poem. I liked the idea you had about the two days, two weeks, two months, and two years. It worked well in the first few stanzas but the first line of the fourth stanza is very long, and could do with some shortening or splitting into two lines. The last line was a short a sweet ending, but the use of "gonna" in the last line put me off. If you change it to "going to" it will sound better. Thanks for sharing, keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Aww so sweet.. great poem, I loved it, very cute and expressed alot of emotion, 5/5

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