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by fallentears Oct 3, 2005 category : Dark, fantasy / unexplained
I know what's right And what's wrong But the ideas I form Are all wrong Was there a right way from the start? I've been lead onto a fast approaching train on a railway Who will fall to their death first, me or the passengers on board? Everyone thinks they know everything But will everything be enough when you're faced with terror And your only dying wish The sacrifice you shall surrender might not be enough No-one can prepare you for the way you fail in life There are just some things you'll never know
by BeeJay
I liked this poem as well. You are good at filling your poems with emotion... I like that! Good job! Love always, ~BJ~
by Spitfire
Thats really good !! great job !! 5/5