Aww thats so sweet, and very good, I liked this poem alot, shows how much you like this girl, 5/5

Aww a very sweet and loving poem. I think some of the words you used made this poem very beautiful, and although some others seemed to be the typical overused phrases in love poems, I think you got away with it. I liked how you said I know you're not perfect, but I love you anyway. One line I didn’t quite understand was "You are the best girl I've ever kept." The way you say "kept" makes it sound as you think she’s your possession. Maybe some rewording of this line would make it sound better. Also, in the third line you say "Watching you lips move to say," it should be "Watching your lips move to say."
Overall a good poem, it takes a lot of work to write a decent love poem and I rarely praise love poems. But, yours is good. Thanks for sharing.

Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though But this poem was awesome! Great job with everything very talented. 5/5!

That's a really sweet poem. I love how you say she isn't perfect, but she's "pretty close". Not many people can get away with writing love poems, and not sounding completely repetitive. You pulled it off though, amazing job.
~Jaime

Awwww another great poem, i really hope you share these with this person your a very talented writer!!! your flow is amazing, you use a good vocab, and the rhymes are all right on 5/5

What a beautiful poem
well done
i feel all arm and fuzzy now!
xoxox
~*mary*~

This is good.It could use a little tightening up/revising, but it flows well and it is saturated with emotion and is so sincere..I'm a sap for love poems and really like this one.
Oh, and thanks for the comments on a couple of my pieces!