Great work mark. i've been waiting for your newest piece of work. my favorite stanzer is stanzer two but my favorite line is the closeing one. i hope you'll advise me on my poems.
Brad

I love the way you started this poem great work xox rc

:claps: very brilliant... well written... liked it... how did u come up with that??? just curious... ur imagination is dang good... 5/5

hope u pass by mine sometimes, i posted "in the arms of an angel" vote and comment much appreciated...
much love
***letishia***

Nice poem

keep ritin

xXx

This is a really good poem i like it. the part about the heros mask is really good i like it. I never knew that spiderman had a dark side to him, its great!

Awsome poem, its probably the best yet out of this category, well done 5/5
Brook........................

WOW that was awesome, it flowed so nicely, grt job cant wait to rd more
take care, til next time
~Peace N God Bless~

Thats bloody impressive dude, i expected sort of like a jokey/silly poem but....i woz rong! very impressive, jus shows that like even tho ure percieved as a hero..inside it can still f**k u up...nice...quite dark..reminds me of a black and white photo i saw of Spiderman once...dont no y.... but yea..check my poems out..comment/vote..whatever...keep up the writing dude
Laters
Brad

Wowo..this one is wonderful....keep up the really great work....
~SIERRA~

Real great poem it showed feeling that one hero might feel ata time i think its great keep it up
take care
HS

Wow nice work
i really really liked this poem
well done

THat Kicked it, i wish i could beat the $#!t out of bad guys for a living. 5/5!

Dude you are a awsome poest keep it up o by the way names jeremy nice to meet u

The only improvement I would suggest would be removing the exclamation mark because it detracts away from the serious mood I'm guessing you are creating.
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You say I’m on top of the world,
But you don’t know what I have lost!
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But otherwise I thought this was a nice piece, really effective.

Hey loved the way u ended the poem well done hun!! Jessy x x x

This poem kicks ass nice one read mine sometime u might like them
good luck with ur poems

Very good poem.

WOW!! Great poem!! the hero thing is awsome

Dat waz good. Nice poem man

Wow I love it.. but I really love spiderman and maybe that has something to do with it.. I am no to sure how this is a dark poem though.