Heart's Goodbye

by Grotesque Angel   Oct 4, 2005


Never thought id see you go,
Never thought you'd leave,
However I know as time went by,
Theres nothing we could achieve

Rules binding ever winding,
Constricting us yet driving us apart,
How is it that I'm so close yet still so far away,
I thought this would just be the start

However now you must leave,
My heart is going with you,
Now that your gone I cannot live,
I thought it would be just us two

© Copyright 2005 By: Grotesque Angel

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    GOD DAMN IT
    STUPID PIECE OF CRAPPING CRAP
    GRR.
    ANYWAY LMAO
    LOVE YOU ANYWAY
    ~eMAH

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I tyhought i ended too soon.
    i enjoyed what was there though.
    very intrigued.
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    xx
    oo
    xx
    oo
    xx
    oo
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

    LOVE

    x x
    o o
    x x
    o o
    x x
    o o
    x x
    oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

    i hope this turns out if it doesnt it says i love u
    anyway yeah
    ~Emah

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    Thats more like it on the rhyming side of things, good work

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Hm, this poem was okay. I liked how you expressed yourself-but at the end it really didnt flow all together. You know, the ending is one of the best parts of a poem. (Not saying that peoples poems suck)-But its a given. You need to make the start as good as the end. Nice job anyways.

    -Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    I don't really understand it, or maybe i didn't read it properly..i like the bits i understood thouhg....

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