A Tear

by ShadowDancer   Oct 4, 2005


A tear
A drop in an ocean
Loneliness and Longing
Runs down my cheek

A trickle
A stream running
Love and hopelessness
Pushes me

A ripple
A start of a wave
Anxiety and fear
Shakes me

A wave
A tide of red
Anger and jealousy
Drowns me

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Great work! I Love this one. The set up fitted it so well.. it really all came together perfectly!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Another great piece
    I plan to comment on everyone of your poems
    Even if I dont finish doing so now
    wow, i loved this one as well
    love
    ~Em

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is soo sad. i love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    This is another good one. Keep it up. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Absolutely brilliant. Fantastic work. added you to me favourites... thanks for the comment on my poem by the way : )

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