You think I don't care?

by FlowerThatDied   Oct 4, 2005


One more scar,
What good does it do?
All I'll remember is hurting you,
But I never did anything wrong,
I was busy trying to make something belong,
I was trying to make someone care,
Trying to make someone there,
But no one noticed, no one came,
You should've noticed I was feeling to blame,
Something was wrong and you still shouted,

I was sat crying on the bus,
Yet you still kept making a fuss,
And I was left with no one there,
I admit I'd left you and you thought I didn't care,
Well, Now I don't and with one last tug,
No one else will I bug,
I'm sorry for not being there for 4 hours it was wrong,
But really I was thinking bout you and other things too long,
So I'm not saying sorry,
And I'm not saying no,
Because apparently I don't care about you and so,
I'll show you what its like not to care,
Screw you, Screw this I'll never be there!

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  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Awesome job babe, who pissed u off this time? lol...atleast i kno i didnt do it so i can sleep at night knowing i didnt hurt you lol. keep up the gr8 work! not only does ur poem rock my socks but so do you lol!!!!!!!
    !!5/5!!
    -eLiZaBeTh-

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    I love that!!

    great job
    omg it is so good !
    i really like it
    5/5
    i really think u could go far

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Okey girl...cool down...and i care...okey...so...don't get mad over someone...who doesn't care...

    Nice poem by the way...but the sentences i must say is quite going up and down...i don't know...why don't you try reading it again...maybe they'll give you a clue.

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