Amazing... gave me shivers every other line...wow

This is really powerful, and very true, sad but unfortunately true - well done xxx

So true and so depressing. Great poem absolutely awesome work. You're so talented and amazing...don't ever throw that away
xoxoxo

I know how you feel...i used to feel this way...whenever i look at my sister...playing happily...doing the things i used to do...and it recalls all those sweet memories of childhood...but then now i'm trying to live my teen years happily...so when i'm adult...i still can recall it...

Nice one by the way...definitely a 5/5, no doubt at all...this is amazing...and hey thanks for yours comments...you are so sweet...

A truly beautiful and yet sad read.Some how your words paint a living pic for me. Your true gift is boundless

So so true, i hated that, one day wakin gup and realising the world isnt perfect like i had thought it was. amazing.

So good, and true, i love it!-xxx-