Sitting alone with my razor blade
its covered in a pretty red shade
I like this line, it's a really good opening, i like the contrast it creates.

The rhyming pattern is good to. This poem is really good because people will be able to relate to it. You've written a poem about a subect that to most people is sensitive and i think it shows that you are understanding cos most people i know laugh when they hear about people cutting and stuff.

Anyways, really great poem, i liked it a lot.

XxX Cici XxX

I think it was an awsome poem. I can totally relate to that and you took the words right out of my mouth. Did they taste good. lol You wright about it so well! :) 5/5 Keep it up!

This was a really good poem wow!! the only thing is the flow could be a little bit more like even or w/e....but still it was awsome 5/5

Nicely done! the flow was awesome and the emotion was there! i really dont know what to put to help you make it better because it was AWESOME! 5/5 good job!

To tell you the truth i really don't think that u need to add to it...its perfect the way it is...you are extremely talented and don't let nyone tell you other wise.all of us think differently and we shouldn't be judged by that...anywayz 5/5...u deserved it

Good job. I'm not really a fan of cutting poems though.
~try to keep a constant flow

*read your poem

Well i loved it...honest...this was great this is one cutting poem ill remember

its just a small fix
to be able to handle lifes kicks

best part

really nice job it flowed well...rhymes were all good...i think it may have been shaky in a few areas but i think only once or twice...i enjoyed reading this great job

Really powerfull poem ya have done here i rweally enjoyed you playing with words my only semi-negitive thing i would have to say is that i have read thru it a few times now and it sort of has a problem with the flow mid way thru still great poem

Did that really happen? Very real picture in my minds eye when I read that one

This is interesting, I like your choice of words, like 'rip' it really makes the poem more effective and realistic.

This is a great poem love your style of work
Leona