Lethal Shadow

by Jamie   Oct 5, 2005


Most boys all deserve something similer...jk well kinda lol

Cant leave him alone
Night plays your disguise
You long for just one more
Chance to look into his eyes

So you stalk your prey
With a heart full of venom
Youre going to find him
And stick your fangs in him

You sit outside the window
Bloody desire will be satisfied
Glare into his bedroom thinking
Of every single tear you cried

Hes careless and laughing
Your hate quickly gains motive
You have it set in your mind now
That without you he wont live

You crash through the window
His scream bleached by shock
You smile like a cynic
Then to him you walk

He shoves you away
You retaliate with a smack
He starts to yell
In attempt to fight back

But now he bleeds from his mouth
You cant ignore the attraction
And you waste no time
Achieving satisfaction

You grab him by the hair
And jerk his neck back
Bite down real slowly
So he feels your attack

Too long to hold it
You let yourself go
You shred him to pieces
He should have never said no

Bloods on the wall
And bloods on the floor
Bloods on your hands
And draped down the door

You have sufficed
The pain that was inside
And now you must leave
To the shadows to hide

So until next heartbreak
Everything stays right
Go back to killing innocent
Playing in the night

***the ending kinda sucks but i really wanted to use the words playing in the night in a sentence cause i think it sounds cool lol and i wanted to get the idea across that the chick is a vampire but yeah sucky ending i know***

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  • Again, another nice poem.
    I like dark poems as you've probably noticed.. lol... so yeah this is probably one of my favourite ones of yours.
    I like the title by the way...

    xxx cici xxx

    (Thanks for ALL your comments, i appreciate them !!)

  • 18 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    Sweet poem. You have an awsome style of writing and I enjoy reading your poetry. Welcome to my favorites! :)

  • Wow...this is kinda similar to chuckie...lolz...all bloody and stuff...i really liked it...u r in my favz...keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Wow.... extremly dark poem. loved it... i'd love to do that... but not to the guy i like, but to his girlfriend >:) hehe.... i'm evil. anyways, awesome poem. you should write more like this.

    p.s- you should have the word Shadow in your title, since you reffered to it frequently. or Night

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Wow...wow...lol thats all i have to say..its kinda SCARY! lol 5/5 loved it
    Becky
    xoxo