Uncurable

by Queen of Doom   Oct 5, 2005


I'm feeling kind of down
But I can't let you know
You think I'm gonna kill myself
You refuse to let it go
This is just like last year
And I know what you would do
You'd send me back to 2 south west
Because you think they know
Exactly what is wrong with me
And will make me let it go
But this is not some kind of bug
That you can cure in a day
You can't cure it at all
Theres no possible way

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  • 20 years ago

    by Rachele

    I know what you mean. That's the same thing for me.

  • 20 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    An interesting piece with some good lines. Becareful with apostrphes and exporting documents here because then your word turns funny "canâ??t".
    Make sure to try and explore your topic and dig deeper into it, you have some good ideas in there that could be brought out using more imagery, description and metaphoric language.
    Also try using some more punctuaton to help the reader grasp the emotions you are displaying.
    Some good ideas, keep on working at it!

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