by CHIP Oct 5, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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Love is something too hard to explain, yet is even harder to contain or keep slain, you cannot release it, for its held, beneath this empty fleshy shell. Its not the unpleasant things which we all must dwell or our hearts turn black and deep as wells |
by struggling
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I really like this one you are a very good poet keep up the good work. |
by Becx
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Awwwwwwwwww i love the last part sooo cut soo sweet if i didnt know u id swear u were gay lol u say wht everygirl loves to hear awww great job soo 5/5 ~beckey~ |
by Ashley
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This poem is excellent, keep writing!!! |