As we..
by kujo666 Oct 6, 2005
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As we fight as we live as we cry as we die as the rain falls as night terns to day and as day becomes night i will love you no mater what i will be there until the day we die i will never let you go you are my one and only and no one will stop me from loving you i can not lie to you I'm in love with you so as i lay here at night wondering if you love me |
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18 years ago
Aww tha so cute i like it
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18 years ago
by loenly angel
That is really good keep on writeing more
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18 years ago
by Miss Lovely
You're poems are amazing! I love them! keep up the good work!
~deanna~ -
18 years ago
This was another very good poem! I really liked it. there were a few grammatical flaws I spotted, though:
"as night terns to day"
~ turns* instead of terns
"i will love you no mater what"
~ matter* instead of mater
Other than that, the poem was beatiful and you got your point and message out wonderfully! Good job!
~BJ~ -
18 years ago
by Neha
Aww..thats cute...5/5...good job
