This is a really good poem i like it. you have a real talent for this.

Yea, you do have great talent when it comes to writing! this poem was really touching, and i know how you feel, really.. keep up the great work, and check out some of my poems if you get the time.. stay strong!

Woah! loved the last two lines, and how you brought back the first to into the ending. very effective. i really liked this poem! good job!

Wow you can write really good poems!!!!!!! i love this one though!!!! it was very cool!!! keep it up!

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