Comments : Alone, I Bear the Burden

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Very well written, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by jac

    That's an excellent poem, well written, with great meaning behind the words.. keep writing, you're good at it.

    check out some of mine if you get a chance.. stay strong!

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    This is great really deep and heavy. the sad section is definately better 4 this 1 then the life section although it would probably still b good there. plz read and comment on sum of mine.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachael

    I love this poem because it goes through so many aspects of your life.
    It's truly powerful with the brightest intention to get out how you truly feel.
    Please keep writing because I'm sure your poems are helping many people
    be true to themselves and to others. Keep up the great work. Rachael xoxo