Powerful. i loved it! especially the end, where she finally lives as who she is.
good job!

Hmm very interesting poem. I find that a lot of people are like this nowdays-cutting themselves,attempting to commit suicide..ect. It makes me sad. Why can't we as humans find our inner strength and push on. Life is tough and as it gets worse it can only get better. Anyways 5/5 from me. Mercedes

Luving u josie, u no i love u, n u r ALWAYS on my mind, bibi babe ill talk 2 ya soon mwahzz great poem hun ur one and only forever and ever MADDISON!! xxx

Pi don't want that person to feel bad, that makes me feel bad, maybe i don't see, and maybe that person isn't open, but i no one thing, this person sohuld tell people how they feel, it might be hard even if your not open, but you might feel better, and i no one other thing, that person would feel so happy if you told her how u felt....i don't want that person to not love me, coz that person means the world to me, if that person didn't love me or wasn't with me every day i no one thing, i'd be dead! i love u hm and you will always be in my heart...

love Maddy xxx

Wow thats sooooooooooo sweats if that person reads that im sure he/she will want to kill u...but then she/he wont coz then that person cant liv with out u.......im sure that the person hav its reasons that he/she doesnt tell u........

Lmao well i wish that person would tell me their reasons! i really want to no, its so hard living each day pretending not to be hurt by the words that this person hasn't said! its heartbreaking!! i don't no what to do! i hate love, it hurts so much, its like i have this hole in my heart coz this person hasn't told me, well this person has told me once, but i doin't no if its true now....

If u trust this person u will believe she/he and wont ask 4 he/she reasson
because they are way to personal and u really wouldnt want to no if u did find out....if u love this person like u say u do u hav trust.....

What do u mean trust? do u mean i should no if this person loves me or not? y dont i want to no? i would rather no than not no, coz then i'm not left hanging....well yea...

In loveu hav to have trust....which means u will believe that peron on how they feel....and wiill stop asking on things u will neva no.....lol

R u scared to tell someone how you feel coz u dont want to lose them? if i never no nothing can happen, or it could without knowing if its love or not....

Nope its not that i was on the phone wif this person and he/she sed that its sumthin u wouldnt neva guess....

I almost felt like this was meant for me... very well written once again. You really understand the pain and darkness of the knife. Amazing work.
5/5

Thats a very nice poem! you really know how to write poems about knife! keep it up!