I understand all the emotion in this one. I understand what your going through and how you feel. Plus the way you placed the words make sense together!!! Great one agian

Very powerful poem.
I like the concept behind this. I can totally relate.
'I use a sharp sharp blade
To correct the mistakes I've made'
Very strong words, i liked it alot.

xxx cici xxx

This is very good...and i love love love the ending...great job is all i have to say. nobody on this site writes like you do...and i love how u express your feelings 5/5

Fantastic poem, one so many girls can relate to. Great work, 5/5.

I love all your poems! they are so well written. stay strong and keep writing! x

An amazing poem so powerful and ful of emotion.

This poem is brillent, amazingly writen and so ful of emotion.

I can see the pain you must feel and i hope you'll be ok. Good poem, wonderfully written straight from the heart. :)

Excellent job! I can really relate to it. I like the way it flows... perfect flow. 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

Oh very sad
5/5
keep writing

Once again, you did a beautiful job.

This poem is very emotional. You described how you feel very well, and you get the flow going which is excellent.

Wow hun I can really relate to this it sounds like it came from your heart....

Your words are deep, with much feeling and emotions! i really enjoy reading you work! well done!
luv em

I don't know what to say, that was beautiful. I have nothing to correct you on in this one. I loved it just the way it is. You did a splendid job of using different forms of writing not making every word match perfectly and in the end that created a perfect poem. So sad and filled with emotion. Almost wish it would have been longer.

You have talent,

5/5

I loved this poem...your flow was great and I think you have real talent as a writer.

Very powerful and well exressed deep emotions in this. very well written.

5/5

When I loved when leaves you that can be bloody hell, it really can. My ex left me and I tried to take my life, b/c of the combination of him leaving and the other crap that was going on so I know that is not the way to go. I am also a cutter, now hopefully no more, I guess I just want you to know others have walked those shoes before and I promise if you try hard and stand tall you can make it through. Brilliant poem hun.

-Tainted Mikochan

Really raw emotions here. Brilliant Stuff.

All The Best
Sondos

Very powerfull!!!! you expressed your feelings very well.. i know how u are feeling, and its great to get your emotions out liek this.. good work :)