Again beautiful, with that dark emotion in it! Remember to use Commas like between *sharp, sharp* Other then that, amazing and beautiful=) I love ur poetry!

Thanks for taking the time to read my poem, you're really talented, keep it up

Alot of the rhyming was too predictable and at times felt forced I kinda have the predictable rhyming too.
But i guess it doesnt make the poem bad just need to extend our vocabulary lol i dunno
But yea the poem it was so sad and i felt like this at one point but i found someone who picked up the pieces maybe you will too. :)

Hey, wow amazing poem! It flowed so well together and had alot of depth. I really liked the lines:

"I'm not done..
I'm not through...
because I'm still here
breathing without you !"

I don't know why but it caught me off guard, i can really relate to those lines. Well said. Keep up the awesome work. 5/5
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Aww, This was sad! Really good though! =]

I noticed you havn't written a poem in quite awhile =[ I hope you start writing again, Your poems are great!

luv natalie x-x

This is an amazing poem. I loved it. 5/5