Omg I LOVE this poem! It is creative and rhymes and flows almsot effortlessly. I love it really! and it's not sutpid lol. I like the last stanza for some reason. keep it up!!

Dude, this is NOT stupid or bad or anything, it's absolutely amazing! i love it and it describes me in a sense...just wow....keep up the amazing work! you have talent =) *hugs* i'm here if you ever need to talk...

-brittnay-

Wow was better then your last the flow was amazing and the poem was so true, but do remember not ever one is out for there self there some really nice peopl out there it's just the matter of finding them. keep up the good work i hope your ok 5.5

I really liked this poem, I found noting wrong with it, and it was really emotional, And i hope you really arn't thinking about ending your life it would be a big mistake.

Wow i really like this hun. it seems all your poems have great emotion and a great vocabulary. 5/5 xox

I 100% agree with u...great poem once again....my fav. part was

"People are out to get you
They want you to break
Only care about themselves
Theyre all so f.u.c.king fake"

very very very true....but u know not all ppl are the same...keep it up and get at me when u need help or something...kisses

Wow that was honestly one of the best poems i've ever read...ah!!
i just loved the truth in it all..the hurt... it was all so well shown. but please don't think everyone's like that!!
i really loved the last line...its so true yet no-one thinks about it that way..
great job *still speachless!!*
xoxoxox 5/5
you're so on my favs!!!

Wow that poem was awesome! it was anything but stupid! i really loved this stanza~

I wish tears would come
To distract me from you
But Im entirely too numb
And you dont have a clue

def. a 5/5 nice job your so talented.

That was so awesome! loved it