Daddy's Mistake

by AnorexicDream   Oct 8, 2005


She ran home
tears streaming down her face
all the pain was building up
it she couldnt take

she ran home
and grabbed the knife
and cut her skin
she wanted to end her life

but she didnt dare go deep enough
she cut 5 times and they bleed
and then daddy came
and hit her head

he started to beat her non stop
all she did was scream and cry
and just pray one day
she would have the nerve to commit suicide

*sucks i know*

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  • 18 years ago

    by alyssa

    Never say anything you worte sucks you an amazing writer and as long as what you write is from your heart it cant be rated. people rate them but as long as its from the heart its good. i love it hang in there girl i love u so much and i need you to hold on
    alyssa

  • 18 years ago

    by scoopy

    It dont suck itz a really good poem but really sad too. juss remember keep ya head up and dont let n e thing at all bring u down!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Aw hun, i really don't know what to say... im really sorry, but i know that no matter how many times i say that, it won't help. i just hope you realize that you can get through this. take care and stay strong.
    i luv u, don't ever forget that.
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by x0xTaKeMeAwAyx0x

    Good, poem. hope ur alright. x

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    It doesn't suck....it's good, as usual =).....i L.O.V.E. love you! *hugs*

    -brittnay-

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