Asleep

by kujo666   Oct 8, 2005


When I close my eyes and fall into a dream
the one wish I've ever wanted is granted, it seems
I finally have you by my side
I finally have you to be mine

All the happiness and sensations I feel
tricks my mind into thinking it's all real
With each dream that seems to last forever
I'd swear this time we're really together

But when I wake up and we're apart
I'm filled with devastation deep in my heart
If the only place we could be is in a dream
then I wish I'd be forever asleep

If only I could jump away from reality
into a world of fantasy
into our dream made for you and me
Oh, how I wish I'd be forever asleep

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    So good, Josh! Good job writing it! I really liked it a lot! My favorite stanza was:

    "All the happiness and sensations I feel
    tricks my mind into thinking it's all real
    With each dream that seems to last forever
    I'd swear this time we're really together"

    It was wonderful! Good job and keep up the great work!

    ~BJ~

  • 18 years ago

    by Shuuu

    Hey, it's moonlightrose from Chat. Wow, your poem rocks! :P Talk to ya later, xXx

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