Life and happiness

by lover girl   Oct 9, 2005


I forgot what its like to be happy and never wanting to cry. When my friends and i would never fight and guys never meant a thing. Oh how i wish i could go back to thous days when a smile was always on my face.

I can remember the day my happiness came to an end. It was the day that, that guy took the meaning of my life away. He stool my virginity and he took my soul. The pain and feeling are burned in my mind and i can still feel it in my dreams.

trying to fight back the tears and attempting to stay strong. The depression is killing me as i cut away at my wrists. Now the only memory i have is how i don't wanna live.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lover girl

    Yes it really did happen

  • 18 years ago

    by chfj4

    I didn't get to comment on the way this story stays in good stead the whole way through as wel. The way it was written was really stricking. You refelected on the good days going into the time when it happened and then explain what you are feeling. Great.

  • 18 years ago

    by chfj4

    This poem is really good. It was sort of sad though but nonetheless it was good. "Now the only memory I have is how I don't wanna live" I liked this ending, it basically sums up how you felt and how you currently feel about what happened. 5/5. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    Thts really cool and full of alot of emotion. good work! keep it up!
    becca x

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