The Five Dooms

by Grotesque Angel   Oct 9, 2005


The Five dooms inside my heart,
Hopefully will never come,
But now name them I shall start,
Although of them are dumb

My first doom isn't shocking,
Nor is it that bad,
For I think that this man is king,
Its losing my grandad

My second doom is weird,
Funny in some ways,
For this although I have not teared,
To think that Goth is just a phase

Third doom comes out,
Its insane to me,
Hell life would be if this happened,
Not being able to see

Fourth on this list of dooms,
Almost at the end,
Lonely would be all rooms,
If I lost every friend

Finally the last of them,
Its the worst of them too,
The worst thing to happen to me,
Would be losing you

© Copyright 2005 By: Grotesque Angel

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    WOW this is really great its definately worth a 5
    I dont know why you've only got a 4
    its soo good
    expertely written MAtt
    keep it up
    Em

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    Fair enough, it's not great in my opinion but worth atleast 3

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Another awesome poem. it's very personal and meaningful. excellent work matthew xoxoxo
    -suzie

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    Great poem, very honest and heartfelt. I really liked the concept. I think that one the hardest thing to do when writing is writing from the heart, you tackled it with grace and style.

    I look forward to reading more from you.

    Kind regards
    Hayley

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