Trying to get over you

by ShadowDancer   Oct 9, 2005


We used to be good friends
and I felt even more
you could tell me anything
and I never did get bored

and then one day she came alone
and you were swept away
so I was left alone again
to dream of yesterday

but I decided to let you go
and not to make a scene
even though she stole you
and swept away my dream

still I thought I could be strong
and got out and do the right thing
but you never seemed to leave my mind
of you my heart would sing

what have you done to me?
And when will it end?
Something is not right
I won't try to pretend

I can't get over you
No matter how hard I try
And when I see you with her
My heart begins to die

Since the day you walked away
Nothing but you seems real
And I know you can't help it
I just don't appeal

The other girl sees me
And she knows who I am
That I couldn't keep you
And she's sure that she can

But I can't stand looking at her
And wishing it was me
She's so sure of her self
Something I never can be

So what will I do
To make this pain leave
I can't stand it anymore
Make it stop.

Please....

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really powerfull and sad.. the emotions just jump off the page.. i can really relate to this one

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Wow, that was truely beautiful.
    I know ive already commented but here i am again.
    He doesnt deserve you! if you were with him he'd only take you for granted.
    Im not sure if your still single, but I am now and I love it.
    Dont discard what you have, but recieve what you get and know that you'll deserve it.
    I hope that didnt come out wrong but anyway
    thanks
    ~Em

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMemoriex

    Omg, this poem is so touching. And considering your poem ratings, you're a very talented writer! Keep it up, I'll add u to my faves =)
    Check out my poems if u like.. ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Omg this is sooo amazing! i'm adding u to my favs. ur such a wonderful writer! i love how u expressed so many emotions, i can see everthing you wrote about, and i can hear a sad voice when i read this. this is truly beautiful. i'm adding u to my favs...did i say that?

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I love this one! your an amazing writer and every poem i read of your just keeps getting better and better... keep it up... i honestly enjoy reading your poetry...

    sammie

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