This is a sweet poem.A bit awkward in a couple spots but not that it takes away from the pure beautiful expression of love.Good piece.(and thanks for the comments on a couple of my poems, especially the newly revised TEN YEARS GONE(trying to get feedback on the new and/or revised pieces).I hope to see more of your poetry.Take care.

I really adore this. it's one of those i print out and keep handy when i need a pick me up. don't worry, i'll print it out with your name still on it. lol. thanks for the inspiration. 5/5. great job

Great poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x