Comments : Suicide Replay.

  • 15 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    I really like this poem, its really deep! 5 out of 5! good job comment and vote on mine if u have a chance.

  • 15 years ago

    by amber

    Very good poem. . .i don't know whether you wrote this about yourself or just out of the blue but either way i believe it. . .even if it hasn't happened to you, it's happened to someone out there.
    comment on mine :D
    ~*~Amber~*~(lifetimecowgirl)

  • 15 years ago

    by iDeePanda

    This poem was superior to anything i've ever read.....this was amazing, i loved it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Just Me

    Really good poem it really hit close to home for me i really love it keep writing

  • 15 years ago

    by rachel

    Wow reli strikin poem i love it 5/5 lv rachel xxx

  • 15 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    That was relly good can u read and rate some of my poems thanks bye

  • 15 years ago

    by erica

    AWESOME. i love it... rate on mine please!

  • 15 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow hun, I really loved this poem. Your described so well what you were feeling and put so much emotion and soul into you poem. It's definately something I can relate to. I have tried to kill myself eight times, and I have been a cutter for about a year. My heart goes out to you hunny, please hold on.

    -Mikochan

  • Wow its so real and powerfull...
    i know exactly what this poem is getting at

    well done

    xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    That was amazing!! You're going onto my favourites list, definitely!

    A few things that I picked out while reading the poem that could be changed...

    "watch as i was hit and abused
    screwed over, wasted and used
    throw around punched and confused
    too bad at that time no one new
    all the things i was going threw"

    here "threw" should be "through"

    "as your watching...
    count all the slits
    how many times have i cut my wrist
    hot many nights did i get a razor blade kiss?
    sad, theres a movie out like this."

    theres = there's

    "I dream of suicide"
    did you notice I'm dead inside
    I've been emptied out and lost all my pride
    behind my eyes I'm forced to lie
    i get no funeral and yet i dyed.

    ^^ I get no funeral and yet I've died

    If you watched closely
    You'd notice theres a missing scene
    I'm surely not okay
    Now My life's stuck on suicide replay

    ^^ there's

    Great write overall!!! Amazing job with writing emotion into your poem.. Powerful and a perfect portrayal of the events inside the poem!