Oil

by Shnivel   Oct 11, 2005


I am like oil.
Spreading slowly...
Poisoning the lives of those who come into contact with me.

I am like the trees.
Swaying slowing...
Then motionless and lonely as I see the fun of others.

I am like rain.
Falling slowly...
Crying down on my loved ones,
Soaking them with worry.

I am like a dark, dark hole.
Dying slowly...
Sucking my life into this hole.
This dark dark hole.
My life is disappearing into this hole...
Being sucked...
Sucked...

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Liam OBrien

    WOW. Livvy, that was a gooden. Really well done. I know this has nothing to do with your poems (which are amazing) but what have Hannah and Daryl been saying to you? They said they said something to you about me (email me :D)

  • 18 years ago

    by Shuuu

    Hey Shniv, wow, that poem really rocked! You got a really good talent for them! Anywayz, love ya! Bon-bon! :P xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Karii;*

    Wow thanks for looking mt my poems, and this one is great! hope too see more also *

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By Shnivel