Well written and heartfelt!

Hey thanks for the comment i'm not really good at flow but i'll try harder hey do you have a screen name for aim

That was really good..thanks for commenting my poem...let me know wwhen i ever need to fix anything on my poems.

Wow!! thats soo sad. i didnt think she would die...wow. whew, thats sad...lol ok im done.
i loved it awesome work!

Wow this is so sad it almost made me cry...i didnt like one line and that s all it was:You've killed my mind ,....it just didnt sound right other then that 5/5

Good damn poem.
And yeah theres lesbians kissing on your picture...
Lol anyways
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My poetry if u like them tell me.
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JP
5/5

Lovely. Wonderful message at the end, well told story/lesson. Don't be afraid of love, let the ones you love know how much you care about them...you never know what tomorrow brings.

Thanks.

xxx

Wow..this is REALLY good...5/5 deffinately keep it up
Becky
xoxo

ITS VERY TRUE FINALLY WHO UNDERSTANDS

Hi hi hi...this was so emotional and so intense...i am in love with this poem...well i believed that i shud tell wat i feel too...but after i did...things got screwd up. WAY WAY TOO BADLY...all i did was tell her i LIKED her even tho now i think i loved her...and she said no at first..then ignored...and wat not...i got robbed of all my feelings...and she didnt even bother at all. anyway...keep writing i loved it. btw i and that girl are okay now so im doing pretty good...(not completely okay yet...dont they say that the wounds on the heart never completely go away?)

anyway if u could read, rate n comment on a poem i recently wrote...i'd love it!