Immortal pain

by wanted dead or alive!   Oct 13, 2005


Overwhelmed by fear,
Falling over the edge,
Slipping into darkness,
Falling into death,
My life is fading,
This is my last breath,

My hate burning away,
The wick under a flame,
Disappearing into nothing,
Smothered by immortal pain,
Everlasting,
Never-ending,
Always the same.

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  • 18 years ago

    by morbid_tears

    I loved this poem....but it was a little short. I felt it kinda abruptly stopped but overall it was still really good. 5/5
    ~*Amber*~