You never onced looked my way

by Marianne   Oct 13, 2005


I have love you for so long
i knew it when i first layed eyes on you but you never have seen me i walk past you in hopes you would notice but you never do
do you know how much pain you have caused me? why cant you just take a chance? i know nothing will ever come of us so its sad. i see you with her...laughing and smiling and it puts anger in the pit of my stomach...she is walking around with my love! you know i love him but do you care? no! you think it is funny that he doesn't notice me and you know you have caused so much pain as well. why cant any one see that i'm in so much pain?
when will you look my way? when will you notice me gone?

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  • 18 years ago

    by rebeccaxX

    This poem is cute, i liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Broken~And~Twisted

    The reason i wrote that one today is because i had a concellor and they gave up on me and made me worse great poem by the way

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    OMG another scary moment that has happened to me EXACTLY like that
    you are really quite good at this
    once again a 5 from me

  • 18 years ago

    by Haley

    I really like this poem! It's kind of all mixed together and hard to follow at some points, but I like the whole meaning of it. And about your friend and her boyfriend..I totally know exactly how it feels!! You're not alone on that one. It's not wrong to feel that way at all. Your friend is just getting caught up in her relationship and is enjoying having someone special in her life. Don't worry about it. Soon she'll realize that boyfriends aren't going to last forever..but friends will. Hang in there and keep writing! Thanks for commenting!

    Haley

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