Beautiful..im speechless

Great poem. the last line is very effectivexxx

Soooo sad. a gorgeous poem that could be so true in many schools.... i'll look closer at the "pretty people" from now on....

You're right ruby,
looks mean nothing.
great work!!! it's really well written

sammi
P.S GO AUSSIES!!!
xxx

This poem is awesomely written! Thanks for commenting on mine :)

Damn you are good at writing i wsh i was that good. well am commenting to tell you that this poem is a 5/5

Aww dis was so sad.. but i luved it lol
kep it up kk n take care
mwa xoxoxoxo

I loved it

Omg that gurl is like me! no1 knos that i am like the way i am..but they dun kno me...neway FABULOUS poem! wow...5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Wow.. that was short, bas very powerful i loved every word in it.. i lyk how u found under every something to talk about... gr8 stuff.. i reli lyk ur last stanza and the last line in particular
gr8 job
Nannoush

Wow, This is a diffrent look on things.
I really liked it, for once its from a diffrent persons eyes.. well done.. I hope this girl finds your smile and can stay stong.
You made the poem great without a steady flow which is hard well done xXx

I absolutly love your poems...and i have no spaces left in my fav's list but i'm gonna create a spot for you....this one kinda describes me in a way....im not the prettiest...but i'v had ppl say i was...and no1 really understands the feelings i have inside....mostly b/c i dont want them to see

Wonderful poem. It has a lot of meaning to it and the poem has a lot of emotion in it.

Wow..this is really good 5/5 keep it up
Becky
xoxo

Thank you for pointing out that people may be feeling different on the inside. As a girl who has suffered from anorexia, I am used to being judged by people when they see my outter self. =) Well written and expressed!! =P

Fantastic poem- extremely well written. i'm off to read the rest of your poems now!

I can really relate to this one.
I love it how you define everything into a simple way that's easy to understand.
5/5

Very Sad, is all i can say..

I wanted to say thanks, and that this poem is excellent. its very rare that you find a poem that doesn't rhyme, and is still amazingly wonderful!

I LOVE this!!!!!!
i can really relate to this
i am the girl who everyone thinks they know so well, while they really dont kno me at all...
xxxx
abby