Blind

by elmtree   Oct 14, 2005


(This poem type is called an Etheree, which consist of 10 lines, each line adding one more syllable on.)

Breath,
And out.
I can't live,
But neither die.
Anonymous me,
Lying in my shadow.
With my decorated mask,
And a need for love, so intense.
I've been left behind, too many times,
But if they look for me, they'll be too blind.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I really liked this one.. it was beautiful.. and I think that you chose the perfect structure for your poem because it made everything that much more intense

  • 18 years ago

    by elmtree

    Thank you for commenting, and I\'m glad you liked it! ^.^

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow.. really interesting, loved how you did that, awesome poem, and structure and it seems like it would be very hard, but you did a good job 5/5

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