Comments : The way it can go.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very nice and very sad 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    Speachless really good i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    Speachless really good i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Oh..my.. Wow, that's so sad..
    5/5 Very well-written, keep it up!

    God Bless
    Saiya

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Great poem. No errors, subtle and to the point, and the flow was real good. 5/5 once again.

  • 17 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Very sad poem. It's horrible how things like this happen every day.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh my! that was very very sad, i can't believe the world has so much sadness within it, i thought god wanted us to be happy?
    overall, the poem was magnificent, keep writing
    xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Hard hitting well written dark poem

    perfect flow

  • 17 years ago

    by NannO

    Omg.. thats so harsh and cruel.. i liked the way u presented the idea in a story-like fashion.. loved the rhyme and the flow was almost perfect.. i reli liked the beginning.. im not a big fan of these things, but u had something to say and we shud all be alarmed to abuse.. and u said it well and efficiently.. gr8 job

    take good care
    NannO