Awe what a sad poem :( It's beautiful. I love it. Keep up the good work!

Wow. beautifully written, and i lyke the repetiveness of "little girl, little girl" it makes it seem lyke this is actually happening. This also has a nice pace and flow. keep up the great work. take care and stay strong. XXXXX
JL

Very repetitive and well written! keep it up! -peace-

Sad poem, but i really enjoyed reading this xxx

I really liked this poem i know this has been said already but the "little girl, little girl " really added something to it i fell like this poem says alot without really saying it

lots of love
☼Becky☼

Oooh chilling poem, you create a good atmosphere with it, very nicely done x

Indeed, hammer, very nicely done, enjoyed reading it. Repetitiveness was quite scary, very chilling, also notnice that its little girl, sounds like ur too young. Whichi supose is how youre feeling kinda...love you xx

Indeed, hammer, very nicely done, enjoyed reading it. Repetitiveness was quite scary, very chilling, also notnice that its little girl, sounds like ur too young. Whichi supose is how youre feeling kinda...love you xx

This was so sad=( but the effect it gave was BRILL! keep it up hun:)

Jenn

Thanku everyone, ur comments are really appreciated, luv u all xxx

HYSTERICAL COMMENTING?

YES I THOUGHT SO

HAMMER YOU ROCK

WAY MORE THEN... SEDIMENTARY

Lol, thanku stabby, luv u lots xxx

That was great! -sad, but great...keep up the work n take care!