That was really realy good actually. I like how each stanza had 5 lines, many poems have 4. but neat style on the wrighting and use of words. altough For my actions of no reason
For getting down and drunken
didnt really soudn right for some reason. but great job!

Hey giel nice job so sad i feel your pain i hope your ok. nice poem keep up the great work 5.5

Awsome write, thx for r/c on my poem

I liked your poem, and the unique Sceme you had of writing it.... very interesting... i like how meaningful it was, and how free your thoughts were, and it wasnt a forced poem.. very well written keep it up

Pretty good but not as good as your other ones. You seem to repeat "I" alot. But the story behind the poem was good.

Very nice, I love the style of writing you used. I like how it all seemed to build up to the point at the end. 5/5

Ohh wow, this poem is amazing....Touched my heart, it's very deep and emotional, excellent!!!! I loved the way you repeated the lines in the verses, that was a great idea, very unique...Keep up the good work...

*Much Love Sabrina*

Love this. I've read this before and was sure I commented on it but must have not pressed submit. It's beautifully written and very emotional. 5/5 well done x

Really really good.i love it, and the form
5/5

Related to you work ENTIRELY! Take care hun! Please see some of my poems too! xoxo

I liked it this poem. the way it started was brillient, and i like the way the first and last line of each stanza is the same. my favorite stanza has to be the opening one, it flowed so well.

Brad

P.S. feel free to trash another one of my poems, lol. i agree with you though on my poem 'the last time', there isn't anything specail about it...i just felt like writing something, lol

Dude you deffinately need to write another poem cuz you keep giving me comments then i have nothing to comment on cuz i alraedy got like all of yours!! lol so write another one like NOW! haha

I liked this poem alot
alghough I didnt get the whole meaning
but its good
keep it up
Yours
Nema
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Wow...this is deep and i feel like that sometimes and i really don't know why but this is great 5/5