Outstanding ricaameter profound poem great work

Amazing!!!!! you're so talented. keep it up!
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This is a truely captivating piece. I could feel every word, so much I began to shiver inside. You have incredible talent.
The harshest soul-less wind
What amazes me is that you combine things that otherwise would be considered irrelivent to each other, like soul and wind. You depict it as it is, soul-less, but in tern give the wind life. I don't know if you understand what I mean, but that's how I see it. 5/5. I look forward to your next poem.

I liked this form, i just write im not smart lol so this is cool that you can do this...great job i loved the vocab you used 5/5

HanRik,

Outstanding job, well done!

regards,

Steve

I love this poem, exepcially the style of it, verrrrry good poem and good job. Also thanks for the comments on my poems I greatly appricatite that. ^_^