I liked this poem alot, the description was great, really great, and thank you so much for the comment i really appreciate it, i hate when ppl just say, nice poem 5/5 bye, you really showed me my points and gave me a real inside look, thank you, i appreciate it, once again, very nice poem, im dieng to read more of your work 5/5 talk to you later sometime, bye
Creepy... lol, I had a teacher that for some reason knew everything about my house, was really friendly to me and well i was under the impression that he lived somewhere near me..But he lived an hour and half away! So how does he know so much about my house you ask, I don't know. But alot of people thought he was creepy, so the thought of someone watching ina tree is almost scary. lol..But anyway.. It was really sad, and really well written. I do songs myself sometimes, but I haven't really been happy with what I've come up with. So it made me very happy to see another song writer :). Grood job!