Comments : Your Window ( A Song I Wrote)

  • 13 years ago

    by amelia

    This is lovely...scarry !!
    i liked it..
    i like "your not free from my broken heart"
    its nice & stabs through
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 13 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Nicely done, it flowed well and you had emotion in it! well worth the read and i really enjoyed it! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by x Saiya

    It's pretty good but there are some lines that don't make much sense gramatically. It flows pretty well, nice job. Hmm I say 4/5 pretty good though. :)

    God Bless
    Saiya

  • 13 years ago

    by Manny

    Pretty cool.Well thought out.

  • 13 years ago

    by Carmen

    Very..interesting.. thats about all i can say..

  • 13 years ago

    by Syn

    Very good song.. i like it

  • 13 years ago

    by k i k i

    That's scary, but very well written :)

  • 13 years ago

    by k i k i

    I love this, it's great! Keep up the great stuff :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Firstly, thanks for your comments on my poems,
    secondly i love this poem, its pretty scary, well written and very passionate.
    Love always
    Tara-Kay

  • 13 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    Nice song..

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    I liked this poem alot, the description was great, really great, and thank you so much for the comment i really appreciate it, i hate when ppl just say, nice poem 5/5 bye, you really showed me my points and gave me a real inside look, thank you, i appreciate it, once again, very nice poem, im dieng to read more of your work 5/5 talk to you later sometime, bye

  • 13 years ago

    by Void

    Creepy... lol, I had a teacher that for some reason knew everything about my house, was really friendly to me and well i was under the impression that he lived somewhere near me..But he lived an hour and half away! So how does he know so much about my house you ask, I don't know. But alot of people thought he was creepy, so the thought of someone watching ina tree is almost scary. lol..But anyway.. It was really sad, and really well written. I do songs myself sometimes, but I haven't really been happy with what I've come up with. So it made me very happy to see another song writer :). Grood job!

  • 13 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Great poem, or song I should say. I really like it! But I think it should be under the Dark catagory, haha. Awesome job, keep it up!

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 13 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Id love to hear the melody to this if its a song...i write some lyrics too! it was a little..scary....lolbut good all the same! jesx

  • 13 years ago

    by last_petal

    It's very very nice... I wonder what it would sounds like when it was sung.... NIce job... Keep up the good work...

  • 13 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Lol. That's funny. Staying at someone's window. lol. I mean it's sad but the thought of it is funny. lol. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaila

    I didnt really get this song but i sorta got the message nice job