NOOOOO, hunni please don't make me cry like this, please I need you here I need you to be strong...I really don't know what to say, this poem breaks my heart, I feel your pain and I wish that i could take it away....I am so glad that you are alive....I know what you are going through, you know i have tried that a few times now....I love you hunni so so much

*Your friend forever*

Hey babe great poem i hate it when people say that ppl try to commit suicide for attention...thats gay they dont know what anyone else has been through!!!

5/5
Love can only be found, in the hearts of those who know what it's like, to feel pain.

Great work!!! i love the way it flowed so well. good work!!! the language makes it easier for the reader to connect.

Ruby

0hhh that was really heartfelt with al0t 0f em0ti0n darl. havent sp0ken t0 ya in a while? neway great j0b -0n the p0em!

Wow! if this is true im glad that you didnt die... alot of poems on here are about death and suicide and its really sad. im just glad that you survived!

also i liked this poem alot, it showed true emotion and how you really feel about life. The rhyming scheme was really good, you didnt try to force any words or anything. it had a nice steady flow
great job, i look forward to reading more of your poems.

Great Job with this one. Absolutly wonderful.. it all went together so perfectly and the rhyme scheme was jus awesome! great grand job lol.

Amanda, alot of emotion in this piece and another one that touched my heart. Some are stronger than others and I pray you find strength to deal with the hurt in your heart...We have to be strong and I know You're saying easier said than done, but you have to make yourself strong because you are loved...I love ya dear heart and I TRULY CARE!!!!!!

Love Ann