Omg u got a gift. another gr8 poem! thnx 4 the comment!
~Who Cares?~

Pretty good poem, I liked it. Keep writing!

Hey! Just back checkin some more of your work (told you i liked it hehe) and I really liked this one, simply because you expressed yourself directly to someone, where as usually ppl (including me) are only talking to an unknown person, named 'you' lol. The only part that i wasn't sure of was when you changed the rhyme scheme from a,b,c,b, to a,b,b,c... I dunno if you understand but it's this verse:
Ive spent 15 intricate years trying to understand.
And now I finally think I do.
The center of this pain, has and always will be you.
Because, Dad your what Ive needed all along.

hope you get it, if not drop me a line, or pay no attention to my ramblings lol. Good tho! Keep it up :)

Yet another great poem def 5/5 take care sarah x

I feel that way about my dad. gr8 poem so much emotion! 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

I am keeping up with your amazing work and this poem outlines who you are and alot of your other poems keep it up Jake

Dont give up on god.
Js.