Faaaaaabulous as per usual. a sad and moving poem with depth i could drown in.

Wonderful!!! that's all I can say I'm speakless.

Gr8 rhyme scheme...excellent vocabulary..and all around gr8 poem! good job. 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

That is so amazing... very deep I really like it:)

Aw its so sad that some ppl actaully get caught up so much that this actually happens to then....great poem it flowed nicly 5/5

Wow, that was VERY well written, I LOVED the concept you were dealing with and you managed to write about it so well. I escpecially loved how you almost had a 'moral' to this story as the last stanza. I must say my favourite part was by far: "simply a personality on loan". Great work!

Love the way the poem had a message in it. and it flowss so well.

The concept of this is just outstanding... i actually was thinking about a particular person when I was reading this and it opened my eyes! Thanks a heap! I think a girl I know of is in need of some support and friendship! =) Thanks for opening my eyes!

Sorry had to comment on this one as well as it's brilliant! I tried to write a similar poem called "Material Girl" but it wasn't half as good as this. added you to my favourites!

WOW....You are brilliant....Your a great poet 5/5

I dont think I've ever had a poem relate to me as much as this one has.
Amazing work, I loved it.
5/5

Wow. Just...wow. This poem was amazing. It honestly was. You described the story so well and it flowed excellent. Keep on writing, 5/5

Phenomenal work on this poem. It truely was amazing.

So true, so very truew
love
Em

Nice work. but I would have liked if it went into more detail of what happend to her..