Just shoot me

by Metal_Queen   Oct 17, 2005


Shoot me now
So I don't have to open my eyes to face the world
If you don't I'll just take all this pain
Until the pain is my friend
I don't want to face the world alone
I want to feel loved and cared
So shoot me now
So I don't have to face the world alone
If you don't shoot me then let me sleep and wake me up when the world is ready to be my friend

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Okey...i won't shoot you...but i won't wake you up either...just so you can have your sweet dreams...but if it's a nightmare...then i'll wake you up...hehe...

  • 18 years ago

    by ratchild666

    You've pulled off the concept really well and i like how you've tied other ideas into it. keep writing ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather Prior

    I like this poem. Some days I don't want to wak eup but then I remember that if I don't then my future will be ruined. please read one of mine and tell me what you think.

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