I know how that is...my best best friend lives acroos seas and i havent seen him for 5 years. Well great poem I love it. Keep up the great work hun.
Juls

I liked this poem because i could relate to it my best friend lives in another state now! i think this was cute but the flow was off. A good effort though! ~mel

Okay, this one i like alot more. It was siimple, short and said everything. Being only 15, you have alot of time to really be a wonderful writer. As of right now, you are great and show lot's of potential. Continue writing I'll be reading your other poems. =)

By the way, I've added you to my favorites, so keep putting poems up so I can read, comment and vote for you. =)
-Ally 5/5

I just moved from a place where i basically grew up so this poem is extremely close to home for me. I really like the emotion you put into it

This is truly a cute little love poem. Well done :) 5/5, Em