It sure made me cry,.

Oh! what a piece, I love the just story. it's full of feelings and the spontaneous overflow of powerful emotions and sentiment are incredible!
love your work

A beautiful love story so well written xx

I love it

lyn,

Tiny dancer, I really liked this poem. It's very touching & sad. As I read it, it gave me chills w/teary eyes. Great rhyming

I love it, but I hate it, but I love it so much😭 Great story.

Excellent, heart touched poem well done..

Oh my...I can see why it is the most favored poem here. A really heart-breaking story beautifully told.

beautiful poem

aww.. my tears is about to roll down.. beautifully sad.

Well written Tiny Dancer 46! If your motive was to make me broken hearted, it worked. It was a long tale that followed two lovers from their childhood, with all the bumps in the road, and death ending it all except the many melancholy memories. Well rhymed.

VERY GOOD!!!