Snowflakes

by ♪AlwaysOnMyMind♪   Oct 18, 2005


She looks out the window
And sees snowflakes fall
She wonders how theyre created
What started it all

All the snowflakes
They are so pretty
They bring some beauty
To this old city

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I really like poems about nature and this one is no exception. I find that the Nature section of Poems and Quotes is where some of the best poems are found. I like writing Love poems and find that I incorporate many nature themes into them. There are a lot of poems in the Love section but there are only a few that really shine where in the nature section I find the opposite – most of them are very good. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more from you in the future. If you like trees you can read a poem I wrote called – The memory of my shadow. The poem Searching also has a nature theme - I wrote this way too long ago when I was a kid and have thought many times to rewrite it as an adult. But somethings are better left the way they are no matter how badly you wish to change them.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Very true and well written poem samantha. keep it up.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    A nice flowing write, although a suggestion from me would be to put more mystery in it, because of its short 2-stanza style, something ambiguous would be swallowed well.
    Other than that, I have no other complaints.
    Good work.

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